Third story..revenge on salesman

KillerBee370 · 12-11-2011, 11:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Thechidz

I stopped reading at warp drive.

I made it one paragraph past that...

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FL 4Motion · 12-11-2011, 11:48 PM

other story was better imo.

PS-everyone knows in order to fix a warp drive, you need a wookie.

RiCharlie · 12-12-2011, 07:31 PM

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Originally Posted by FL 4Motion

other story was better imo.

PS-everyone knows in order to fix a warp drive, you need a wookie.

Well good to get feedback..the other story was a bit on the dark side.,.this was something intended to be lighter.. I could write something really really black and on the dark side . but I did not think it would go over..

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FL 4Motion A True Z Fanatic Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: FL Posts: 4,776 Drives: Baby Shark Rep Power: 701617	other story was better imo. PS-everyone knows in order to fix a warp drive, you need a wookie.